This will function similarly to the MSPFA Discord Adventure Reviews thread. If you're not familiar, you leave your adventure link up (at least 50 pages are required), and others read it and give you constructive criticism. If you're not looking for that, this is not the thread for you, sorry.
I don't currently have an adventure up, but if you're looking for something to review right out of the bat, feel free to check out Gamma Session. It never quite got off the ground due to me not having planned out any of its late game and reusing a lot of Homestuck story elements to the point of excess, but I would be happy to get anything extra from it as well. https://mspfa.com/?s=62211&p=1
here goes
https://mspfa.com/?s=60256&p=1
TenMod, also known as Tenebrous Modem, is a fanventure where 4 teens play a game known as LANDR with their friends, with a dash of meta bullshit on the side. I've been working on this comic for a little over a year now, and it's around 136 pages long as of the time I'm writing this. There's a lot of other themes I'm trying to establish right now, so I'd love feedback since it gives me an idea of where I could improve. Thanks!
