Okay so I'm writting a fanadventure, Homestuck R, which is like a Homestuck bad future, the general vision is like if post canon happened in homestuck early acts (not literally) and Rose was pushed to a more of a protagonist role.
I think im capable of writting most of the cast of homestuck, but I have so much trouble writting Dave, i just don't have a good grip on his character and i written myself to a corner making him matter a bit more in the next part of the story. If someone would give me advice to write a convincing Dave i would be glad, it be direct advice or recommending someone's analysis and shit like that.
I thought i had a good grip on him but I see now that i don't, I also know that when writting a story not everything should be set in stone, but what im trying to do requires me giving at least a bit of narrative importance to Dave, so I can't just write him off.
(Also in the actual comic i've written two Dave's convos until now, if anyone willing to give me advice wants to know how i'm doing)