Really liked how it starts with WV's console view. Such a good idea.

The 11 minute timeframe really did this pilot dirty considering the massive amount of shit crammed into it. "Here's this thing! And then this thing! And then this thing!". I can see how most newgens came out of it feeling very confused. It really should've been around 40 minutes, with some of the animation toned down to balance the budget.

As with most Popular Youtube Shows(TM) most of the dialogue/acting is also obnoxiously corny and over-the-top, which I really do not like. But apparently I seem to be in the minority with this, so whateva..

The narrator seems unnecessary in its current form too. I think a better way of doing this would be to show more of WV "playing" John, and the narrator is responding to WV's inputs. The sylladex and other game-like mechanics would fit a lot better if we saw WV actively fiddling with the controls trying to direct John to do stuff.