as much as i think john was swearing too much i honestly think dave wasnt swearing enough. his dialogue felt weirdly clean and unobtrusive

also the 2020s slang was a little jarring.... like especially considered they established in the first few seconds that this is still set in 2009. either make it april 13, 2025 or forego the modernness

also also dave having any voice other than awsten knight's was a little jarring but that's fully 100% a me problem