I think Homestuck would work better as an animated series. I'm not a big fan of Homestuck's "iconic web-comic charm"; Commands, wordy dialogues, intermissions, Act Acts, typing quirks, gameplay segments. "Multi-media project" be damned, these are flaws! They aren't inherent to the story being told!

...Not very relevant to the pilot, which looks great, I just wanted to talk about Homestuck's supposed "un-adaptability".