thanks a heap! i've been experimenting with mspfa formats for years now and this is easily the one i'm proudest of. i definitely agree that the stacked text is a little awkward, but i think alternating them would mess with the full form of the thing--the final intent is to have 9 simultaneous timelines! so the fully stacked grid is very important in that regard. also, i actually came up with it before the flipjam started! the idea for it was part of the reason i chose that prompt for the flipjam that year LOL. i started and ran the flipjam until just this year!

RE: syntax errors, do you remember where those were? i feel like ive given it countless proofing passes but i'm always missing stuff.