RE:meat I commented on the last page of your adventure, but here's a mirror in case you happen to see this thread again:

"First of all, can we talk about how fantastic this adventure concept is? Since it's a flipjam entry, I assume it was based on the theme, and honestly that is an amazing stroke of genius. Having multiple timelines display and be controlled at once is such a fun idea, especially with shared inventory encouraging messing around with doomed timelines and causing schasms. The global mechanics also add a lot of depth here. Totally up a fan-adventure's alley.

I really like the humor and writing of this, it's very Sleuth-like and I think it's nice. Besides some syntax errors here and there, it's all good. I'm not experienced with early MSPA art but I think that's also very accurate.

My only strong complaint is the vertically stacked text gets a little hard to connect to their panels sometimes. I would personally line them up interchangably, but it doesn't take away from the experience.

You should update this again sometime!"